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The Bod Squad Chapter 21 (The Big Finish)
« on: April 20, 2021, 10:24:39 AM »
Author's Note - Okay Gang, The Squad Leader here. I'm transferring my works over from the old C-S-S-A to here so they don't get lost to history. One thing I'd like to say though is it is a little bit embarrassing and humbling to go back and reread these earliest works of mine. I've never had a job where I write for a living or anything like that I'm just a normal dude who enjoys writing smut. I'm quite proud of the creativity and the ideas I had but the sex scenes in this series and my earliest works are just so short and frankly not great. It wasn't until I started reading the works of writers such as Carnage Jackson and TRL and especially the king KMB who is not only the best smut writer out there but a great friend that I was able to start (pun intended) fleshing things out a bit more. Modern day writers such as MTL and Cadeauxx and so many others are keeping the great tradition alive.

I say these things not to be tough on myself but hopefully to be encouragement to any aspiring smut writers out there...You WILL improve if you just keep writing. I look at this series and compare it to my most recent works and I am vastly improved. Keep at it guys and gals!


The Bod Squad (Episode 21) – The Big Finish

by the Squad Leader


Starring – Jennifer Love Hewitt, Britney Spears, Kirsten Dunst and Rachel Stevens
Special Guest Stars – Katie Holmes, Tiffani Thiessen, Jessica Alba, Natalie Portman, Natalia  Cigliuti and Elizabeth Hurley.

The Bod Squad is a top secret team of four highly trained, sexy young women, who in the tradition of Charlie’s Angels are led by their oft heard, but never seen director Jimmy. The members of the Bod Squad are Love: the oldest member of the group and their unofficial leader, Britney: the party animal with a killer body and a mean streak to match, Rachel: the British bombshell and Kirsten: the baby of the group who uses her sweetness and innocent looks to accomplish things the others can’t. Their purpose is to go undercover and use any means necessary to solve crimes and protect humanity.

Hey gang, it’s the Squad Leader here. I just wanted to take a moment to thank everyone for reading my series and for all the positive feedback as well as the constructive criticism. It sure has been a great ride, and I hope everyone has had just as much fun reading this series as I’ve had writing it. So many memories. I mean, who can forget some of the more memorable Bod Squad moments from Love’s adventures on Survivor to Britney’s backstage fun at the VMA’s to all of the behind the scenes action at WWE’s Raw? Who would have known the real story behind the Olympic figure skating controversy if I hadn’t relayed it to you faithful reader? And what about all of the interpersonal dynamics going on within the Squad? Katie’s betrayal (betcha didn’t see that one coming), Love and Kirsten’s on again/off again relationship and Jimmy’s strange behavior?

But alas, everything eventually run’s its course, and I think this series has run its. So buckle up for this final chapter in the Bod Squad series. That reminds me, where were we when we last heard from our heroes some five months ago? Love had busted Eliza out of jail, Katie had kidnapped Natalie Portman and was holding her ransom for a cool 30 million dollars and all of the girls except Kirsten, Rachel and Jessica had managed to make it to the rendezvous point. They were on their way there Kirsten was confronted in a gas station restroom by Natalia, the woman who had broken up her relationship with Love. So without further ado, the big finish.

Episode 21 – The Big Finish:

“Kirsten! Are you O.K.?” Rachel called as she knocked on the door.

“Please, you have to trust me” Natalia whispered.

“Why should I?” Kirsten hissed back.

“Because if you don’t, you’re all going to go to jail!” she pleaded.

Kirsten started to open the door and expose what was going on when Natalia added “And that includes Love.”

Kirsten stopped for a moment, her mind buzzing from the fading hypnosis and the conflicting information swimming through her head.

“I’m fine” she finally called out to Rachel, trying her best to sound normal. “I’ll meet you in the car in a few minutes.”

“O.K. sweetie” Rachel replied doubtfully as she strode back to the car.

“Start talking now and talk fast” Kirsten demanded as soon as Rachel was out of earshot.

“Look” Natalia began. “I know this is going to sound crazy and you have every right not to believe me, but you and your friends have all been brainwashed. I’m what you might call a mercenary. I do dirty jobs for the right price. Robberies, extortion, you name it, I’ve done it. Anyway, a man called me a few weeks ago claiming to be the boss of the Bod Squad. He said he had an easy job for me to do.”

“Yeah, what was that, fuck my girlfriend?” Kirsten snapped.

“Yes” Natalia responded, lowering her head. “Although I wouldn’t have put it that way. Anyway, he was very intimidating, and he made it very clear that if I didn’t do this job, I would be roughed up or even killed.”

“But you didn’t stop to think about what doing the job would do to anyone else did you?” Kirsten said.

“No, like I said I was only interested in my own safety” she continued. “But after I came to your house and saw all of the problems that I had caused, I started to feel bad. So I decided to do some digging around to find out what this guy was up to. I rounded up some of my contacts, and found out that a man named Jimmy was the guy in charge of the Bod Squad, so I figured it must have been him who called me.”

“No way!” Kirsten exclaimed. “Jimmy would never do something like that to us.”

“Will you just listen to me!” Natalia shot back. “I went over to his office, and I overheard him talking to some shady looking guy about some “big surprise”. And it seemed to me that this big surprise was not something that you and your friends were going to like. So I drove over to your place in Florida to warn you, but you all had already left. I figured you had moved out or split town and that would be the end of things. But I didn’t realize how wrong I was until I saw the news the other day and heard about the bank robbery. I caught the first flight out here, and when I arrived, I got a hold of one of my west coast contacts. He told me that the word on the streets was that you girls had been hypnotized and were living in a house just outside of LA. He also told me that this Jimmy guy had arrived in town the day before and was holed up in a motel downtown.”

Kirsten’s head was swimming with thoughts and emotions, but the hypnosis cloud had all but evaporated. She still didn’t fully trust Natalia, but her story didn’t have any holes in it so far. And why had they robbed that bank anyway? Finally she decided to trust Natalia.

“I’m going to trust you for now” she said. “But if you’re lying to me, you’ll wish it was just Jimmy that you had pissed off.”

“I’m telling you the truth” Natalia insisted. “Now I think it would be a good idea if we were to sneak out of here and get down to that motel to stop whatever it is that Jimmy has planned.”

Kirsten nodded and with that, the two of them slipped past Rachel and Jessica to Natalia’s car. They were ten miles down the road before Rachel or Jessica had any idea that Kirsten was missing.

Later that day:

Natalia and Kirsten arrived at the motel that afternoon hell bent on confronting Jimmy. The only problem was that he wasn’t in his room. So they checked into the room directly across from his and waited for his arrival. After a few uncomfortable minutes, Kirsten finally spoke.

“So did you mean what you said about being sorry for seducing Love?” she asked.

“Absolutely” Natalia replied. “I mean don’t get me wrong, she is a beautiful woman, but I never meant to hurt anyone or break you two up.”

“I think we were headed that way anyway” Kirsten finally admitted. “I guess I just used you as an object of blame. I think the real problem was my flakiness. Even I didn’t know what was going on in my head, but I think this hypnosis explanation is starting to clear some of it up.”

“Still, you know I’d do anything to make it up to you two” Natalia said.

“Really?” Kirsten asked perking up her eyebrows.

“What?” Natalia asked as she turned from the window and saw Kirsten staring at her.

“Well” Kirsten began. “I was thinking. If you really want to make it up to me, you can start by giving me a little taste of what you gave Love. Because I figure if you were good enough to make her cheat, than you must be pretty good.”

“I think that can be arranged” Natalia said as she and Kirsten tumbled to the bed kissing one another passionately.

Their tongues probed each other’s mouths as Kirsten’s hands squeezed Natalia’s firm ass cheeks. Natalia quickly unbuttoned Kirsten’s shirt and tossed it to the side, all the while never breaking their kiss.

“You’re so beautiful” she whispered to Kirsten as she unclasped her lacy bra and let it fall to the ground. She greedily attacked Kirsten’s ample breasts, squeezing them in her hands and hungrily sucking and licking her pert nipples.

“Ooooohhhh Yess!!” Kirsten moaned as Natalia continued to suck away. She eventually moved down to Kirsten’s waist and teasingly unzipped and unbuttoned her pants. After pulling them off and throwing them onto the floor, she slowly slid Kirsten’s panties down around her ankles and eventually all the way off. Natalia lovingly planted kisses down the inside of Kirsten’s legs, from her ankle to her calf all the way up to her inner thigh.

“Oh Please” Kirsten begged as Natalia tortured her by taking her time. “I want you inside of me!”

Finally, when it seemed to Kirsten that she would scream from the anguish, Natalia spread her lips and began to lap away at her dripping wet pussy.

“Unnngggghhhh!!” Kirsten managed to moan as she felt Natalia’s tongue encircling her swollen clit and her fingers sliding in and out of her honey pot.

“Yesss, Yesss!!!” she cried as Natalia quickened her frenetic pace. “Ohhhh my gosh!! I’m commmminnggg!!!”

As she cried out in ecstasy, Kirsten could feel her love juice spilling all over Natalia’s face and hands. She quickly pulled the young brunette up and began to passionately french kiss her.

Kirsten jumped down off the bed to the floor and forcefully bent Natalia at the waist and pushed her face down into the mattress. She quickly yanked Natalia’s skirt and panties down around her ankles and buried her fingers and tongue into the warm folds of flesh.

“Ohhhh yes!!” Natalia moaned as Kirsten worked her fingers into her juicy pussy.

“I wanna taste your ass you dirty little slut!” Kirsten heard herself saying as she continued to finger Natalia’s snatch. At the same time, she focused on Natalia’s brown eye, slowly circling it with her tongue before burying it inside.

“Ohhhh, Fuck yesssss!!!” Natalia cried as the orgasm built in her abdomen. The stimulus in her asshole combined with Kirsten playing with her clit had her coming with a loud wail in no time.

Natalia and Kirsten collapsed on the floor, but as they did so, Kirsten saw a man out of the corner of her eye entering his motel room across the street. She pointed him out to Natalia and they quickly got dressed and ready to make their move.

“We’ll finish this later” Kirsten said with a smile as she gave Natalia one last kiss. “For now, follow my lead.” A few minutes later, they were right outside Jimmy’s room.

“One, two, three, go!” Kirsten yelled as they kicked in the door to his room.

Things happened in a blur once they were inside, Kirsten grabbed Jimmy and threw him down on the bed with a gun to his head while Natalia closed the curtains and shut and locked the door.

“So you were going to sell us out you scumbag!” Kirsten yelled. “After everything we’ve done for you! I should kill you right here and now!”

“W-what are you talking about?” Jimmy stammered. “Kirsten it’s me, Jimmy!”

“Don’t play dumb” she replied. “Natalia told me all about how you hired her to break me and Love apart and she also told me about the big surprise you’ve got planned.”

“So you know then?” he sighed as his body went limp. “I knew you girls would be upset, but I didn’t think you would threaten me.”

“What did you think?” Kirsten asked incredulously. “That I would just sit back while you brainwashed all of us and left us to rot in jail?”

“What on earth are you talking about?” Jimmy asked.

“That’s the big surprise isn’t it?” Kirsten asked.

“Of course not” Jimmy cried. “I would never do anything to hurt you girls.”

“Then what’s the big surprise?” she asked.

“I got a good tip on some real estate” he said. “The big surprise is that I’m retiring. And another thing, I’ve never spoken to this woman in my life.”

“Well if you’re not the person who hired me, and you’re not the one who brainwashed the Bod Squad then who is?” Natalia asked.

Kirsten quickly pulled Jimmy up to his feet.

“Sorry boss” she said. “We’ll talk about your retirement later. I think we all need to head out to that cabin and save the rest of the squad.”

“Then let’s go” he said and they hopped into his car and raced off.

That morning at the rendezvous point:

“Good work” Love beamed as Katie and Natalie came strolling through the door. “The boss is going to be so pleased. But don’t you think we should have her handcuffed? She is a hostage after all.”

“Oh, I don’t think she’s going to try to escape” Katie said winking at Natalie. “Are you?”

“No way” Natalie replied. “I’m having too much fun.”

“Good” Love responded. “But still, I think I’ll have Rachel and Britney keep an eye on you. We’ve already had one disappearance today, and I don’t think the boss will be too pleased with another.”

Britney and Rachel came out and escorted Natalie to the other room leaving Katie and Love there to talk.

“What do you think the boss is going to say when she finds out Kirsten is missing?” Katie asked.

“Why don’t you ask her yourself?” came a female voice from the doorway. Love and Katie spun around to find Lieutenant Hurley standing in the entrance to the cabin.

“So you’re the boss huh?” Love asked.

“That’s me” Elizabeth replied. “Surprised?”

“No, not totally” Love began. “It’s just that Katie said it was a man whom she had been talking to.”

“Ah yes” she answered. “That little confusion. Well in truth, Katie was speaking with a man. I’ve had my assistant Andrew do most of the dirty work for me. That way I can’t be implicated and it also helps to set up that idiot Jimmy as a patsy.”

“Now on to other business” she continued. “While I am disappointed that our little Kirsten has run off, it is of no consequence. Her mind is probably so jumbled right now that she doesn’t even know where she is.”

“But shouldn’t we go help her?” Love asked almost pleadingly.

“Since when did you get a mind of your own?” Elizabeth mused. “I guess I’ll have to have Tracy up the dosage of your mind control drug. No, we are not going to look for her, do you have a problem with that?”

“No ma’am” Love said attentively as the hypnosis took hold again.

“That’s what I’ve always liked about you two girls” Elizabeth said smiling at Katie and Love. “You always follow orders. And for that, I’d like to reward you.”

“What kind of reward are we getting?” Katie asked.

“Why me of course” she replied, leading them to the bedroom.

When they got to the room, Elizabeth quickly stripped and laid down on the bed. The others were about to join her but she stopped them.

“First I want to watch you two naughty girls do it” she instructed. With that, Love wrapped her arms around Katie’s small waist and began to kiss her passionately. Elizabeth laid on the bed playing with herself as she watched Katie groping at Love’s ample breasts.

“That’s right” Elizabeth moaned. “You two don’t have to hate each other, doesn’t it feel soooo good to get along.” The two girls were making a lot of noise with their heavy breathing as they unleashed their pent up passion for one another. All the weeks and months of being enemies was finally released in the form of lust and desire. Katie tore Love’s shirt from her body and planted wet kisses down the side of her neck and to her breasts where she slurped away hungrily at Love’s rock hard nipples.

“Ooooohhhhh Yesss!!” Elizabeth moaned as she furiously rubbed her clit with her hand. By this time, Katie had lost her shirt and bra as well, and the two topless women were once again passionately kissing each other and rolling onto the bed next to Elizabeth. Elizabeth crawled over to them and removed both of their pants and panties until at last all three girls were writhing around on the bed together completely naked.

Katie and Love were still kissing one another as Elizabeth started to finger Love with one hand and Katie with the other.

“Ohhhhhh, Ooooohhhhh!!” they cried as Elizabeth continued to slide her fingers in and out of their tight pussies. Finally, she slapped Love on the ass and she rolled over onto her stomach. When she did, Katie moved down to join Elizabeth and began to tongue Love’s asshole while Elizabeth lapped away at her pussy.

“Ohhhhh Yessss!! That feels sooooo fucking good!!” Love cried as she felt both Katie and Elizabeth sliding four of their fingers into her cunt, stretching her further than she thought she could stand. All the while, they were taking turns licking Love’s asshole and kissing one another as well as fingering their own pussies with their free hands.

“Oh my God!!! I’m going to coooommmmeee!!!” Love wailed as she felt her juices flow and what felt like an explosion happened in her lower abdomen. Love could feel the heat washing over her face and the sweat pouring off of her brow onto the sheets below her. She finally collapsed as Katie and Elizabeth turned their attention towards one another.

They positioned themselves in a 69 with Katie on top and Elizabeth on the bottom. Hungrily, they buried their tongues into the crevices of the other one’s body, lapping away at the sticky sweet mixture of sweat and come.

“Oooohhhh yeah!! Eat that pussy!!” Katie moaned as Elizabeth alternated pleasuring her with her tongue and fingers. Soon enough, both girls came in a loud climax and all three girls lay still, trying to catch their breath.

But as the girls lay there naked, suddenly Andrew burst into the room.

“Hey Liz” he began but stopped short when he saw what was going on.

“W-what are you doing?” he stammered.

“Oh relax Andrew” she said. “It’s just a little harmless sex.”

“But I didn’t think you wanted anyone but me” he whined.

“Like I said” she replied. “It’s just a little sex. Besides if it bothers you that much, why don’t you fuck one of them too. It’s not like there’s a shortage of hot ass brainwashed women running around here.”

“Whatever” he sulked and turned to walk out the door.

“Now, where were we” Liz laughed as she grabbed Love and planted a sloppy kiss right on her lips.

In the other room:

Rachel and Britney were busy watching Natalie when suddenly, Jimmy, Natalia and Kirsten burst into the room.

“Where the fuck have you been?” Rachel asked. “And who is that bitch?”

“All in due time” Kirsten said. “We just stopped by the Women’s Celebrity Health Spa, and Miss Thresher was very helpful. She gave us the key phrase to snap you girls out of your hypnosis.”

“Hypnosis?” Britney asked. “We’d better go see what Katie thinks of that.”

“Here goes” Kirsten said, ignoring her. “One two three four, Bod Squad girls are fucking whores.”

As soon as she had said the words, Britney and Rachel started blinking their eyes and were back to normal.

“What happened?” Rachel asked.

“I’ll fill you in on all the details later” Kirsten said. “Right now we’ve got to save Love. Where is she?”

“In the other room with Katie and the boss I think” Britney said.

“Who is the boss?” Kirsten asked.

“Not sure” she replied.

“O.K., here’s the plan” Kirsten said. “Natalie, I presume?”

“That’s me” the young woman answered.

“You, Britney and Rachel go take care of the others while the three of us take care of Katie and whoever this boss is.”

“Gotcha” she chirped.

While all of the planning was going on in that room, Andrew was skulking in another. He sat with his head down, muttering to himself when Tiffani strolled into the room.

“What’s the matter handsome?” she asked, sitting down on the bed next to him.

“Nothing” he said. “I just thought that she cared about me more than that.”

“Well, whoever she is, I don’t think she realizes quite what she’s got here” Tiffani said as she started to rub his cock through his pants.

“What the fuck” Andrew thought. “If she can fuck around, so can I.” And with that, he leaned over and started to kiss Tiffani as she continued to rub his ever hardening cock.

“Let’s see what you’ve got here” she said as she kneeled in front of him and slid down his pants. Her eyes widened as his cock came free, and Tiffani wasted no time in wrapping her lips around his engorged member.

Andrew leaned his head back and groaned as he felt Tiffani’s hot mouth working his shaft up and down. She paused every few minutes to lick his shaft or squeeze his balls, but other than that she continued to deep throat every inch of his dick until it felt like she was going to suck out Andrew’s very soul.

“I’m gonna come” he cried right before shooting a mega load of thick come all over Tiffani’s face and hair. She swallowed what she could, but most of the load ended up all over her.

Andrew wasted no time with formalities as he lowered himself down and lifted up her short skirt. Yanking her panties to the side, he began to eat Tiffani out while he reloaded for another go.

As Tiffani writhed on the bed, bucking her hips up to meet Andrew’s tongue, she didn’t notice the young woman peering in through the doorway. Natalie had split up from Britney and Rachel, and was now quite turned on by the show she had witnessed. She rubbed herself through her clothes as Tiffani continued to moan in pleasure, and finally when she could stand it no longer, she stepped into the room.

“Is this a private party?” she asked. “Or can anyone play?” Andrew jumped up quickly, but Tiffani quickly motioned her over. Natalie disrobed quickly and hopped onto the bed. She straddled Tiffani’s face while Andrew began to fuck her.

“Ohhhh yesss!!!” Tiffani cried out as she felt Andrew’s cock sliding in and out of her tight pussy. Meanwhile, she turned her attention back to Natalie, flicking her tongue out and licking away at the young woman’s clit.

Natalie gasped as she felt Tiffani slide her middle finger into her asshole. Never before had she allowed anyone to fuck her in the ass, not even her boyfriend. But she loved the feel of Tiffani’s finger sliding in and out as she continued licking away at her pussy.

“Ohhh that feels good” Natalie moaned.

“You like me fingering your ass?” Tiffani asked.

“Oh yesss, don’t stop” Natalie cried.

“Oh, I’m not going to stop” Tiffani said. “In fact, that was just a warm up. It’s time for the real show.” With that, she had Natalie get on her hands and knees as Andrew came up from behind and gently eased his cock into Natalie’s ultra tight butt.

“Unnngghhhh Oooohhhhchhhh!!” she squeaked as he began to pump away. Never before had she felt such a mix of pleasure and pain, but she was really enjoying it.

It wasn’t long before Andrew’s fucking and Tiffani’s licking of her clit had Natalie experiencing the most intense orgasm of her young life. And as she wailed in ecstasy, Andrew could feel his load about to blow again as he shot a hot load of spunk all over Natalie’s ass. Tiffani climbed over and licked all of the come out of Natalie’s asshole, savoring the salty taste.

“I want to taste it” Natalie begged before Tiffani crawled over to her and shared a sticky wet kiss with her.

Just then, Rachel, Britney and the rest of the team busted in the door.

“Everyone on their feet and in the main room” Rachel commanded.

Kirsten, Jimmy and the rest of the team had managed to round up everyone and had them in the main room.

“So, you’re the one behind all of this Lieutenant Hurley” Jimmy began. “What made you do it?”

“The money you dumbass” she said. “What else? Besides, so I brainwashed eight girls, you can’t pin anything on me.”

“Actually, we can” Jimmy continued. “With Andrew’s
testimony, you’re going away for a long time.”

“Andrew’s tes…” she began before she looked over and saw the look on his face. That’s when Lieutenant Hurley knew the gig was up.

“Let’s get ’em out of here” Jimmy said.

“Wait a minute” Kirsten said. “Did she say eight girls?”

“That’s right” Elizabeth said, figuring she had nothing left to lose. “You didn’t think Katie and her friends turned bad on you on their own did you?”

Kirsten just looked at Jimmy and nodded as Andrew and Elizabeth were led out in handcuffs.

As they led her away, Elizabeth was heard muttering “And I would have gotten away with it too if it weren’t for you meddling sluts.”

A week later:

Kirsten and Love stood outside on the porch at Bod Squad headquarters watching the sun set.

“You know I’m really glad everything turned out O.K.” Kirsten began. “But that sucks with Jimmy retiring and all. I just hope the new director doesn’t suck.”

“Actually, I heard she sucks, licks and fucks” Love answered with a smile.

“Are you saying..?” Kirsten began.

“That’s right” Love said, cutting her off. “I’m the new director. And my first order of business is expanding the size of the Bod Squad from four to eight. Katie, Eliza, Tiffani, Jessica and Natalia are going to join you three.”

“Oh, that’s so awesome” Kirsten exclaimed. “But where does that leave us?”

“Well, I’ve been thinking” Love said. “I think it would be a lot less complicated if you and I were just friends.”

“Oh” Kirsten said slightly lowering her head.

“But that doesn’t mean we can’t get together every once in a while for some uh.. extracurricular activity, if you know what I’m saying” she added.

“I think I like that idea” Kirsten said as she leaned over to give Love one last kiss. But just as the two finished, the other girls came crashing through the door.

“Sorry about the eves dropping boss” Katie said.

“Yeah and sorry about interrupting the Hallmark moment” Britney giggled.

Rachel poured them each a glass of champagne and they toasted.

“Here’s to the many future adventures of the New Bod Squad” Love said.

“To the Bod Squad” they all repeated.

THE END

Well, I hope you all enjoyed my little series. I’ll catch y’all down the trail, The Squad Leader

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Cadeauxxx

Re: The Bod Squad Chapter 21 (The Big Finish)
« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2021, 01:44:40 PM »
What a journey that was. All formatted! Thank you again for sharing with the site!
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Alaire

Re: The Bod Squad Chapter 21 (The Big Finish)
« Reply #2 on: May 10, 2021, 06:10:46 AM »
One fantastic series by you Squad Leader.

I remember reading your stuff on CSSA long ago and liking it, so I am glad to see you posting your stories here.

Though wouldn't a series like this be better suited for the Celeb Series Stories sub-forum where it can be posted as one instead of as separate entries?
 
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The Squad Leader

Re: The Bod Squad Chapter 21 (The Big Finish)
« Reply #3 on: May 10, 2021, 02:05:23 PM »
Thanks for the compliments Alaire! I'm glad you enjoy the stories.

You are probably correct about them going in the Series stories section. Forgive my mistake as a newbie around this site though as until your post I didn't even notice that sub-forum existed.  ;)
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Alaire

Re: The Bod Squad Chapter 21 (The Big Finish)
« Reply #4 on: May 11, 2021, 01:29:23 PM »
Thanks for the compliments Alaire! I'm glad you enjoy the stories.

You are probably correct about them going in the Series stories section. Forgive my mistake as a newbie around this site though as until your post I didn't even notice that sub-forum existed.  ;)

It is no biggie.

Also my apologies for not leaving a longer reply, but if you have sen some of the posts I have left on other writers stories here, like Cadeauxxx and Noj, then I pretty much have the same thing to say about your writing as I did for them.

You are one of the greats and I have enjoyed reading your stuff for a long time. The characterization of the celebs featured in your stories is especially great and as I have said to others and now to you as well, one can easily imagine them acting as promiscuous in real life.

I recall really loving your Jailbait series, which sadly now is only available through the Wayback Machine, unless you have reposted it here. Again, my apologies if you have as I haven't recently checked the archives here thoroughly.

Let me end it with once again saying that I am glad you found this site and I hope you decide to continue writing in the future as I was sad to see other prolific CSSA writers like Voodoojoe seemingly disappear after that site closed down.

Lastly, I also appreciate you including some lesser known celebs in your stories like Natalia Cigliuti who I have always found cute but somewhat forgot about over the years.
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Re: The Bod Squad Chapter 21 (The Big Finish)
« Reply #5 on: May 11, 2021, 02:05:03 PM »
I really appreciate the post! I’m glad to know I still have fans of my work out there!

And don’t worry I’ll be transferring all of my old works including’Jailbait’ over very soon! I’ve put it off for the moment because I’m working on a new short series and I don’t want the new stuff to get lost in the shuffle. I’m in the editing process of chapter 1 so look for that in the next few days! It’s my first story in almost a decade so I’m interested to see what people such as yourself think of it!

Thanks again Alaire!
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